Scrapblog - give me your feedback

Here's the "baby book" scrapblog I've been making for Ben & Maddie. I'm going to have it printed into books. But before I do that, I'm seeking out feedback from all of you. Please send me suggestions for any improvements or notations on typos or anything like that! Thanks. Click on the word "Scrapblog" in lower right corner to take you to a web page where you can enlarge it to full screen. And you can also slow down the pace of the slides.